Avahra Posted March 4, 2011 Share Posted March 4, 2011 I play wow on RP realm, this i just the backstory for my character and my partner in crime, Emberwulf a hunter. Rough draft so there's errors but ehStoreh time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dateranoth Posted March 5, 2011 Share Posted March 5, 2011 I finished reading it and I like it, but I have to say it's a little confusing at first. Jumping from perspective to perspective. The story itself was really good though. I'm not sure how to say what I want on changing the perspective, but either way it's still good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StealthyShadows Posted March 5, 2011 Share Posted March 5, 2011 like i said in WoW already, would love to hear more of it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Avahra Posted March 5, 2011 Author Share Posted March 5, 2011 I play wow on RP realm, this i just the backstory for my character and my partner in crime, Emberwulf a hunter. Rough draft so there's errors but ehStoreh timeI wondered about that, which is why I tried to make the fonts different. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dateranoth Posted March 5, 2011 Share Posted March 5, 2011 Yeah. The font certainly helped. I think, what I wanted to say earlier was to divide it up if you want to take two different perspectives. The first 5 paragraphs could be combined for each perspective. As in, one guys story to this point, then the other gals story . Then they converge when they meet for the first time. At which point you could go back and forth without as much confusion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Avahra Posted March 5, 2011 Author Share Posted March 5, 2011 I may do that, i didn't really edit it much..just kinda typed it up and threw it out there for ideas. haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dateranoth Posted March 5, 2011 Share Posted March 5, 2011 Just my ideas I really like the story. Would be nice to hear some more Tale's of two Tails. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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